给朋友的信高考英语满分作文评析
假设你是李华，加拿大一所学校将于今年暑假组织学生来你校访问。其间，Andy Smith将借住你家。请你代表全家写信给Andy，他的到来，并告知有关事宜。信的要点
1. 上午：学校活动2.下午：游览市区3. 晚上：看电视，玩游戏，聊天
注意：1. 词数：100左右2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯3. 参考词汇：安排arrange
Dear Andy,
I’m so glad that you’ll be here with me and my family for the summer holiday. I’m writing to express our warm welcome and introduce the activities during your stay here.
In the morning ,some activities at school will be arranged. You’ll visit our classrooms, reading rooms, labs, and so on. We’ll take this opportunity to exchange our views, talking about school life, and so on.
In the afternoon, you can tour around the city. And I’ll act as your tour guide. Our city has changed a lot and takes on a new look. You can see what is our city like with your own eyes.
At night , we can watch TV, play games and talk about what we’re interested in. I’m sure you’ll enjoy yourself. I’m looking forward to your coming.
Yours sincerely,
Li hua
[名师点评]
行文自然流畅，文章要点齐全，意思表达真切。详略得当，重点突出。从语言使用的`角度来说，不但使用了一些生动的动词，准确的名词，同时为了使串联自然，又使用了时间状语为连接词，将文章按照时间顺序叙述完整。